I like how you focus on the teen girls and their locations (physically, as well as within the storylines). The lack of any strong central female characters bothered me starting in the Pilot. However, I found Tamara's journey rather interesting in this episode. I also thought both the noir look and the whole "in a virtual video game" theme of it a bit of a bid to show how far the Caprica concept can reach in terms of what we'll see.