This is wonderful! :) Going backwards made each layer that was uncovered feel particularly insightful. I think you added an amazing amount of weight to your narrative with that choice.
And musically speaking, when the bodyswitching section hit I swear I got goosebumps. :D Loved those red flashes as well!
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Date: 2008-08-29 06:49 pm (UTC)And musically speaking, when the bodyswitching section hit I swear I got goosebumps. :D Loved those red flashes as well!